I heard chanting and screaming as I walked up to the mark. I grabbed the softball bat and got into position. I saw the ball coming me at an incredible speed. I hit the ball with force and ran scoring a home run for my team. Making my team and I win. As it came rushing towards us, parents got all there phones out ready to take photos of their kids with the trophy. All the hard work and dedication it took was all worth it in the end.

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  1. I really liked how that in this piece you sort of zoomed in on the moment but I think you mixed up a few words in the 3rd-5th sentences.
    Great Work

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